May 7, 2010, Newsletter Issue #191: Example: Not-So Good Tip

Tip of the Week

Payroll accounting software

Payroll accounting software is important for small businesses because you reduce the amount of time you or your business manager has to spend maintaining employee payrolls. Using payroll software, like the kind XYZCompany.com offers, you can determine that payments are made automatically into employee accounts, and you can easily refer to payroll history to analyse your payroll accounts for taxation purposes.

* This tip was graded at a lesser level for the following reasons:
> Spelling errors
> Run on sentences/grammatical errors
> Pushing client products/services
> Doesn't give the user any value. The tip says using this software will help analyze your accounts for tax season, but it doesn't tell the user why this is important or value-driven.

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